Have you read some Shakespeare lately... you seem to be posting in rhyme... i know thats fun, but dont do it all the time
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Thread: Aggie John
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04-25-2005, 12:20 PM #1All-American
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Aggie John
"...I never wanna see you cry... and I never wanna tell her lies..."
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04-25-2005, 05:26 PM #2AggieJohnGuest
What exactly do you mean
I dont understand at all
Could you post a link
i'm not jason like being 8 foot tall
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04-25-2005, 05:28 PM #3onfirebball05mustangGuest
first i've seen of aj's rhyme scheme...kinda creepy and yet funny lol
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04-25-2005, 05:30 PM #4AggieJohnGuest
What ever do you mena my dear cass
all i'm trying to do is become the best in my class
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04-25-2005, 05:32 PM #5All-American
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i dont understand, how you want a link...
its easy to see and follow i think...
but if all else fails and you need some proof...
gimme some time and ill give it to you
"...I never wanna see you cry... and I never wanna tell her lies..."
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04-25-2005, 05:35 PM #6AggieJohnGuest
thank you so much for your great help
Go get a big mac but hold the kelp
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04-25-2005, 05:37 PM #7All-American
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your rhyme scheme has fallen off...
dont get worried or fret...
you are tryin to hard...
naturally is how you have to let...
it happen, notice the drop off in the rhyme.
this will be my very last rhyme line...
"...I never wanna see you cry... and I never wanna tell her lies..."
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04-25-2005, 05:39 PM #8AggieJohnGuest
i too shall quit
and call it a day
you should just forget
and go home and stay
