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mustang04
11-01-2006, 09:39 PM
i have been writing them since i was a lil kid, and i just wanted to see what yall thought of this one, it's my first one in a little under a year, but i have ALOT that i have written, this was just a quicky


Unseen by me!

If I cried a thousand tears,
And yet nobody ever saw.
Does it mean that all the tears that fell
Were never cried at all?
If I tried my hardest to be with you
Crossed every river climbed every wall.
But you weren’t there to see it,
So to you I never tried at all.
If I were willing to die for you,
Something that some say is my downfall,
But if you refuse to watch me,
Will I ever die at all?

Bull19
11-01-2006, 09:44 PM
NICE

mustang04
11-01-2006, 09:45 PM
Originally posted by Bull19
NICE

thanx!

shankbear
11-01-2006, 09:48 PM
here I sit, broken hearted...........

TigerPride
11-01-2006, 09:52 PM
How about this poem!!

"Old Mother Hubbard went to the cupboard
to fetch her poor dog a bone.
She bent over, Rover took over
and gave her a bone of his own.
Oh!"

Andrew Dice Clay

pirate4state
11-01-2006, 09:54 PM
Originally posted by TigerPride
How about this poem!!

"Old Mother Hubbard went to the cupboard
to fetch her poor dog a bone.
She bent over, Rover took over
and gave her a bone of his own.
Oh!"

Andrew Dice Clay

:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: LMAO

Phil C
11-01-2006, 09:55 PM
MAGNIFICIENT POEMS! :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:

CalallenWildcat
11-01-2006, 10:35 PM
good job! :clap:

CHS_CG
11-02-2006, 12:39 AM
Reggie, I have always been a fan of ur work lol.. that sounded really good dude! You just have a talent for it I guess!!!

District303aPastPlayer
11-02-2006, 12:44 AM
this is my most introspective one yet...

Mace Griffin
11-02-2006, 12:54 AM
whats up with all these femine poems. We cant talk about basketball or "thump thump" as some idiots here say but we can post girly poems and everyone is like aw thats so good i dont get that.

District303aPastPlayer
11-02-2006, 12:55 AM
Originally posted by Mace Griffin
whats up with all these femine poems. We cant talk about basketball or "thump thump" as some idiots here say but we can post girly poems and everyone is like aw thats so good i dont get that.

get in touch with your emotions and let go of the macho bravado and you will understand

Mace Griffin
11-02-2006, 12:56 AM
Originally posted by District303aPastPlayer
get in touch with your emotions and let go of the macho bravado and you will understand yes sir mr past player :clap:

Whsdogs
11-02-2006, 01:41 AM
Originally posted by Mace Griffin
yes sir mr past player :clap:

yah you will find in time we all grow on each other...its really deserving of a good poem if you ask me haha

oh btw..i was the first to see reggies poem...he just had to show me so he walked across the house..what a friend i am i know hahaha just messin, nice poem reg

Snyder_TigerFan
11-02-2006, 08:09 AM
http://www.xtremesystems.org/forums/images/smilies/thatwasgay.gif

Ranger Mom
11-02-2006, 09:22 AM
Don't listen to any of these "yahoos" Reggie.....a poem like that turns a girl on!!:D

TigerPride
11-02-2006, 11:48 AM
First there was the Tiger incident...

http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/1465/snydertiger6xe.jpg

Then there was the I hate girls (http://bbs.3adownlow.com/vb/showthread.php?s=&threadid=51090) thread.

Then the pic with his "buddy"...

http://img476.imageshack.us/img476/3528/wifebeatergy7.jpg

And now a "pretty little poem".

You draw your own conclusion.

pirate4state
11-02-2006, 12:10 PM
Originally posted by TigerPride
First there was the Tiger incident...

http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/1465/snydertiger6xe.jpg

Then there was the I hate girls (http://bbs.3adownlow.com/vb/showthread.php?s=&threadid=51090) thread.

Then the pic with his "buddy"...

http://img476.imageshack.us/img476/3528/wifebeatergy7.jpg

And now a "pretty little poem".

You draw your own conclusion.

:eek: :eek: :eek: :doh: :doh: :doh:

Ranger Mom
11-02-2006, 12:14 PM
Originally posted by TigerPride


You draw your own conclusion.

I don't have to draw any conclusions.....I know him!!:p

Black_Magic
11-02-2006, 12:35 PM
This is what you get
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/KRSimmons/tiger-2.jpg When you do this!! Gay boy+ Tiger and you get a Freak!http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/1465/snydertiger6xe.jpg

mustang04
11-02-2006, 12:44 PM
blackie blackie blackie.....if you only knew

jason
11-02-2006, 12:54 PM
Originally posted by mustang04
blackie blackie blackie.....if you only knew haha...point and case....car hood...


:evillol: :evillol:

Send_the_House
11-02-2006, 01:00 PM
This thread, and the poem both suck.

downey1547
11-02-2006, 01:03 PM
little boy blue.................he needed the money.

mustang04
11-02-2006, 01:46 PM
Originally posted by Send_the_House
This thread, and the poem both suck.

:) :kiss:

TheDOCTORdre
11-02-2006, 02:53 PM
the poem was all right reggie i've seen better one by you

mustang68
11-02-2006, 03:14 PM
A for sentiment

D for loss of meter

TheDOCTORdre
11-02-2006, 03:14 PM
Originally posted by mustang68
A for sentiment

D for loss of meter :clap: :clap:

mustang04
11-02-2006, 03:16 PM
Originally posted by mustang68
A for sentiment

D for loss of meter


good gosh

mustang68
11-02-2006, 03:46 PM
It's my job man:D

carter08
11-02-2006, 04:39 PM
its very good

i have hundredss of lyrics and stuff i have wriiten just sitting around everywhere

mustang04
11-02-2006, 05:20 PM
haha...i liked the part of your job better where we got to eat at Chilis or Fazoli's then go answer a few questions on Academic Challenge!!:D

Mean Green Fan
11-02-2006, 05:28 PM
Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
SHUT-UP

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